My Thanks

This month I want to express a big “Thank You” to the community of people who stand behind all writers. From the beginning of any writing project this includes those:

who help set up a Web Page and other online venues
who maintain those sites;
readers who give time, attention, and thoughtful criticisms to rough drafts (and I mean often really rough drafts);
editors who accept our work and spend hours nourishing it, trusting it; improving it
reviewers who speak publicly about our books, encouraging readers to buy and read
readers who buy our work, who take the time to listen to our stories

My personal thanks on the Leah Contarini Mystery Series goes to:
Sabine Barcatta
Shanna Siporin
Dov & Lev Siporin
Steve Siporin
Mary Sharp
Steve Sharp
Carol McNamara
Greg Stout
Mark Levenson
Laura Fisher
Level Best Books:
Harriette Sackler
Shawn Reilly Simmons
Verena Rose

Writing and Walking in Tuscany

Photos from my recent nine-mile walk to a neighboring village and back. These Etruscan trails are the same as those beloved by Leah, protagonist of my Leah Contarini Mysteries Series of Italian mysteries from Level Best Books. The first book in the series, Bitter Maremma is available now from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, etc; the second book, Death Will Find You, will be out this fall; and the third book, tentatively titled Precarious Refuge, will appear in 2023.  

From a review of Bitter Maremma:

Author Siporin’s novel works on a couple of different levels, first, as a murder mystery—and a very good one at that—and second, as a paean to the Tuscan region, its customs, culture and its colorful residents, all of which are richly drawn by the author. A far cry from the usual noir-ish streets of New York or Los Angeles, Bitter Maremma is a highly entertaining read, one that I most certainly recommend.

–Gregory Stout, author of Lost Little GirlGideon’s Ghost, and Finalist in Best First PI Novel category, 2022 Shamus Awards.

The Cave of the Jews

10 May 2022

     Lower Tuscany. I’ve finished work on the second book in my Leah Contarini Mystery and am ready to send it to the press, happy to let them take over. 

 Today, for a break, I decided on research for the next book. S. and I drove the back roads of the thick forests on the border with Lazio, bumping over narrow dirt roads through the high hills. We were looking for the Grotto degli Ebrei, the “Cave of the Jews.”  This is the cave where our friend, Elena, and her family hid from the Germans during Germany’s occupation of Italy in World War II. Elena was 9 when, in November of 1943, she and her family, left their home and went west and north to the farm of gentile friends. Each month they moved to another farm, sometimes barely ahead of the Facists or the Germans, and finally ended in what came to be called the Cave of the Jews in the same forest where we drove today. 

     The forests of this area of Tuscany are like jungles: chestnut, oak, maple, hornbeams crowd each other, thick as grass, and the ground cover of tangled vines, thorny bushes, giant stands of Scotch Broom, overgrown wild roses, and wild raspberry bushes twist together in tight, impenetrable  knots. 

     Like some other local Jewish families fortunate enough to escape in time, Elena’s family was sustained by courageous peasants/farmers who put their lives on the line to protect Jewish families from the German soldiers combing the area to kill or round up Jews for the camps.  

     We stopped at a house deep in the hills and talked to a man who was eating lunch with his family. “The cave is difficult to find,” he explained. “I could take you, but I have to work on my tractor today. It’s hard to find.”

     So, today didn’t work out, but another day it might, and the story of that nine-year-old girl begins to take shape in my mind. 

On Travel

I’m on the verge of a long trip and now that my luggage is nearly packed, I’ve been looking for books to read along the journey. After searching my shelves, I’ve decided that since I’m a traveler I’ll read about traveling, but from a different era.  

 I’ve settled on writings from Medieval times:  Jewish Travellers in the Middle Ages: 19 Firsthand Accounts, edited by Elkan Nathan Adler; and The Travels of Ibn Battutah, edited by Tim Mackintosh-Smith. The books aren’t entirely new to me; I’ve read a few pages of each one, and I ended up choosing them for the chance to continue exploring the Middle Ages of Africa and Asia.

Ibn Battutah said, “Travelling – first it leaves you speechless, then turns you into a storyteller.” I’m excited to see what story I’m about to enter with these intrepid authors, and I’m anticipating how their travels will change my own.

Another Thought on Asking Questions

Last month I wrote a blog about the value of questions.  After I posted that blog I remembered a story on the same topic – a story I carry with me and think about every day.

There was a young married man who spent his day studying the holy books. As time passed, he became increasingly agitated. His reading led him to a question: What is the meaning of life? He couldn’t let go of the question. “What is the meaning of life? What is the meaning of life” he mumbled throughout the day. His wife became exasperated, “Go, ask the neighbors!” 

So the man went into the courtyard, calling out the question, stopping the passers-by. They brushed him off.  “What is the meaning of life? What is the meaning of life?”

The wife and the neighbors decided to take him to the rabbi in a neighboring town.

The rabbi invited the young man to sit in the chair across from him. “Now, young man, what’s wrong?”

“I have to know, Rabbi, What is the meaning of life?”

The rabbi stood, walked around his desk, raised his arm, and slapped the young man across the face.

Shocked, the young man jerked backward.

The rabbi said, “Why would you want to exchange a perfectly good question for an answer?

It is answers that divide us; it is the questions that bring us together.”

Questions/Answers

My daughter-in-law gave me the present of an online, personal-interview program in which every Monday for one year I get a question about my life. The questions range from those about childhood, to food preferences, to sports, to religious outlook….The list goes on.

These Monday-questions are meant to be a record for posterity, but I’ve discovered that although ostensibly simple, they hide in their midst a fruitful complexity valuable in my work as a writer.

Why?

Because each question is the lynchpin of a moment or episode. Considering the answer to each question, I am tied to the question itself, compelled to search my memory and understanding within its confines, to pay attention to detail, and to search for whatever deeper meaning exists.

Coming up with answers to the questions is like swimming in a pool rather than in the ocean. I can swim lengthwise, crosswise, or diagonally, but whichever way I swim, there is a boundary. If I step from the pool, I’m no longer in it! If I step outside the question, I am no longer responding to it. Thus, each question compels me to focus. And, as I explore the area inside the boundary, the seemingly simplicity of the question becomes paradoxically complex, vast.

Example: Who did you date in high school?

I could, if I wanted, simply list names — but the question is more evocative than that.

My mind looks back at that young high school girl standing in front of the mirror combing her hair, heart pounding with anticipation. She worries about the pimple on her cheek and is more excited about being on a date and going somewhere than about the boy. I suddenly realize that girl never dated a classmate: she has known her classmates since kindergarten; they are too much like brothers to date. So who did I date? And then I wonder, Where did I go on dates? And I see my girl-self hating every moment of a particular amusement-park date; I see her embarrassed by the rides and the screaming. I see her wishing she were home.

Thus, at the same time I’m exploring that teenager’s life, I’m understanding, by answers, aspects of that girl’s character I never thought of before. Why did she hate amusement parks? What else didn’t she like? What struggles was she having? What was the usual date for teenagers in my town? Have I fabricated things about my younger life? Have I even lied about things? Or exaggerated events to make myself look better? Was that girl straightforward? A good student? What sort of date did she prefer? What were the boys like then?

The question snowballs, the pool expands. I swim into water I’ve never considered. My daughter-in-law’s gift leads me to vet not only aspects of my own life, it reminds me, in the long arc of a novel, to explore my characters’ lives from seemingly mundane details. It compels me to consider if I asking the right questions about my fictional characters. Could I dive deeper into their foibles, reflect on the ‘simpler’ facets of their lives ?

Thus, plunging into these Monday-questions becomes not only a gift to my family, it renews my attention to the details of my work, and — fictional or flesh – it is the details that make the design.

Reading the Cartographer

It’s only two months until the launch of the first book in my new Tuscan mystery series. With the second book done, I’m deep into the third book and at the same time, trying to keep up with the necessities of production/marketing on the first book.

Maintaining this balance between marketing and writing fiction leaves me discombobulated. (One of my favorite words for being confused and disconcerted – still, knowing the definition of the word doesn’t change how I feel!)  

Anyway, by late afternoon, I’m knackered, and I find escape from both marketing and mystery by reading a motley array of books that seem unrelated to writing mysteries, but aren’t.     

The Making of a Poem: A Norton Anthology of Poetic Forms by Mark Strand and Eavan Boland

A Mapmaker’s Dream: The Meditations of Fra Mauro, Cartographer to the Court of Venice by James Cowan

Afghanistan: A Short History of Its People and Politics by Martin Ewans

Reading these books and others, I’ve learned that there isn’t any book unrelated to my writing. Everything I read becomes entwined, one way or another, with my characters, with plot or landscape, with my understanding of human behavior.

Fra Mauro. I never thought to read about a Renaissance cartographer. I am writing a series of mysteries set in Venice, but I bought the Mauro book on a whim. How could Fra Mauro, enigmatic Renaissance monk and cartographer who stayed in his cell and reaped knowledge from visiting merchants and adventurers, contribute to a mystery set in modern Venice?  Reading the book, I discovered that Fra Mauro was not just recording information to make a physical map. As he says in his notebooks: “The things [the merchants and adventurers] had observed were phenomena only; what I attempted to inscribe onto my map was the transformation of their observations into that uncluttered grace we find in all living relationships.” How could a writer of any genre not appreciate the summons to fulfill the idea of finding the “uncluttered grace…in all living relationships?

Studying poetic forms in The Making of a Poem and trying to write a villanelle or a pantoum is a demanding exercise in the use of language and form. Using Strand and Boland’s book, I’ve turned creating different poetic forms into a weekly challenge and am gratified to find how effort instructs me in keeping my language tight, precise.

Afghanistan has been in the news recently and by coincidence, I lived in Afghanistan for a year and a half. When I inadvertently came across Ewans’ book I bought it, not sure when I would read it. But I am reading it, and through this scholar’s work am firmly reminded that personal experience never provides the full picture of a place or of a people. We travel, we live elsewhere for a while, we know some things first hand. But there is always more to learn, more to make one amazed, more understanding to destroy stereotypes, always new perspectives on culture, always some thunderbolt detail that makes you wonder how you missed such important wisdom.  

Victor Hugo said, “… to read is to light a fire, every syllable that is spelled out is a spark.” 

For me, this is particularly true about serendipitous reading: I surprise myself with a study of rain, expand my understanding of what it means to be a woman by reading a book on the courageous, intelligent women of the Bible, and give myself a fruitful invite with a layman’s book on astrophysics (From which, too my surprise, I conceived a poem that was later published.)

I know that details can add up to knowledge but perhaps not to wisdom. Still, reading in myriad directions outside usual channels ignites my mind, hands me some new tools for awe, and nudges me toward understanding the lived-experience under the facts.

Taliban Takeover of Afghanistan

The fall of Kabul and final takeover of Afghanistan by the Taliban.

I’ve been watching the news day by day, remembering the good people and quick-witted students I knew when I lived and taught in Afghanistan years ago. I think of the young women, my bright-faced students, curious, eager for education, so ready to learn and to be a part of what was then, a country with possibilities for both women and men.

The young Afghan women of today, unlike the young women I taught and unlike the
women of the last 20 years, are now scrambling to find a way to safety, a way to escape being forced brides of Taliban fighters, a way to hide the fact that they are journalists or fashion designers, a way to protect the businesses they worked so hard to build. All Afghan women today see their freedom fading: freedom to simply walk in the street on an errand without a chadri or escort, freedom to study, freedom to have a say in who they marry, to express themselves openly… The list goes on.

I don’t have a Pollyanna memory of the year and a half I lived in Afghanistan. There
were terrible problems, terrible injustices (as in every country) but there was also social action, education for girls and boys, and the freedom to be citizens of the 20th century. And I haven’t forgotten that the Taliban takeover will be difficult and dangerous for many Afghan men as well, especially for any Afghan still in country who worked with the U.S. and its allies.

I’m thinking too of the U.S. and allied families that have experienced the death of their
children thousands of miles from home. All families: U.S., Allied, and Afghan, that have lost children have undergone one of the hardest losses possible — add to that the grief of those families whose children came home alive but mangled and broken, never the same.  Are they feeling their children died or were injured in vain? Will they eat bitterness the rest of their lives?

What a travesty of friendship on the part of the West this too hasty and ill-planned
withdrawal has been. Bitterness and grief floods the blood stream. Maybe we had to leave; but it’s the way we left and it’s our government’s naïveté about the Taliban (to put the decision in the best light).

Circumstances: memories of the Afghan women and men, those good people I once
knew, and my personal knowledge of losing a child juxtapose in the anguish of what humans can do to each other.

Joseph Campbell once said, “One way or another, we all have to find what best fosters
the flowering of humanity in this contemporary life and dedicate ourselves to that.”

It feels like we’re searching for those possibilities in a darkening room.